Friday, June 29, 2012

From My Work In Progress

Photo by Julian Beattie From Amy & Owen on kariz-matik.com
I dove back into my work in progress (working title: The Lightning Prince) and I'm just too impatient to wait to share it. So here's a little taste from the opening pages. Enjoy!

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Cambria couldn’t ignore the cry. It resonated in her soul, pulling her further into the thick grass. The tangled weeds, slick with rain, twisted around her ankles. Thunder pounded the sky, shaking the earth beneath her. The driving wind blurred her vision and tore at her hair.

She pressed on. One foot in front of the other. The cry came again, softer and more like a groan.

Cambria’s foot struck something hard and she dropped to her knees, searching for something buried in the tall grass. The cold worked its way into her bones, numbing her hands and distorting any sense of what lay beneath her fingertips.

The smell of something warm and metallic burned her tongue. Cambria froze and popped upright, scanning the field for anything that might have left a wounded, or dead, animal behind.

A hand grasped her wrist, nearly shattering the bone with the force of its grip. She screamed and jumped to her feet, but the hand held tight, pulling her back with a desperate whimper.

Falling to her knees again, Cambria fumbled for her phone, using the screen to light the body in front of her.

The eyes staring up at her from behind a thick fringe of dark lashes weren’t real. They weren’t possible. The swirling shades of grey and brown and green, flecked with gold and black, were too variable, too alive, to be human.

She flicked her gaze over the rest of the face – drawn and ashen, marked with blood and dirt. She gingerly touched the swelling under his eye and he flinched.

9 comments:

  1. Okay, you have me hooked. Now I have to decide whether I want to read TA or your WIP first, LOL. How far are you on this WIP?

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    1. Ummm... Less than half way! There's a status bar over on the side. I have about 33k word & I'm aiming for 70k. Then I need to edit I'm sure! I have messy first drafts!

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    2. Ohhh haha,sorry. I was on my phone and the mobile version of blogger didn't let me see the sidebars. Same here (on the messy first drafts), take your time! Haha, I'll read TA in the meantime. :)

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  2. "The eyes staring up at her from behind a thick fringe of dark lashes weren’t real. They weren’t possible. The swirling shades of grey and brown and green, flecked with gold and black, were too variable, too alive, to be human."

    GAH. Gorgeous.

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  3. Omg Jennyyyyyy!! I can't wait to read something of yours. <3

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  4. Wow. I'm signing up to beta this, okay? Seriously.

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  5. I love the style. It captures you.

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