tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1627214116764692432.post8356528290229638551..comments2023-07-30T04:02:45.477-07:00Comments on Jenny Kaczorowski | In Somnis Veritas: The Dreaded QueryJenny Kaczorowskihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00289053983485597342noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1627214116764692432.post-24196113658204980202014-03-05T18:48:05.366-08:002014-03-05T18:48:05.366-08:00I'm always up for query reads, so anytime, jus...I'm always up for query reads, so anytime, just let me know. :-)Megan Lallyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11176772484150176951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1627214116764692432.post-65257303234379333802014-03-05T01:20:46.786-08:002014-03-05T01:20:46.786-08:00Thank you so much! I agree about that line. Now to...Thank you so much! I agree about that line. Now to fix it...Jenny Kaczorowskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00289053983485597342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1627214116764692432.post-91342723567937927582014-03-04T22:25:31.780-08:002014-03-04T22:25:31.780-08:00Um, my only thought is I want to read this RIGHT N...Um, my only thought is I want to read this RIGHT NOW. Although I am a little confused about the "As he fights against the very restrictions she needs to make up for her past," line? I feel like it's missing a word, or something. Otherwise, I love it. Megan Lallyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11176772484150176951noreply@blogger.com